Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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Every
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own issues and concerns, which has to be continuously addressed and resolved. These problems are expected to increase over the
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ten years. In
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has to face and possible solutions to resolve or mitigate these issues. In
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ext ten years
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my
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United Arab Emirates (UAE) has to address two major challenges.
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, UAE's 40% GDP is dependent upon the
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extraction and refining,
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as per the recent geological survey conducted by the local experts, it has been confirmed that
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oil
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would be depleted by the end of
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ear 2022.
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would significantly reduce
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ountry's
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from
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ecession in the
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, Increasing population and continuous developments in IT has increased the requirements for
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government is producing only 7% extra
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eserve which should be sufficient to
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increased requirements until the end of
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ear 2021, but from 20222 onwards, it would be
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uge concern for the
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as people and many industries in the
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are completely dependant upon the current
electricity
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supplied by the
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these issues are severe and might be a crisis,
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these problems could be easily resolved by taking
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equired precautions and proactive approach.
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, GDP dependency on
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extraction and refining could be easily reduced by diversifying
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's
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by implementing various fiscal rules and regulations which might include
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eduction in
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tax (VAT), as per the recent survey,
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ountry could improve its
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by reducing its taxes as how it was during the years between 2009 till 2017.
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ountry
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ifferent source of
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including solar panels, wind turbines and water turbines. These new investments would be able to not only generate the required
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but
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create sufficient reserves for any difficult time. In summary, my
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faces the risk of load shedding and recession due to the
oil
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depletion and these risks could be highly mitigated through investing in sustainable green energy sources to ease load shedding issues and introducing new fiscal rules to improve the sources of
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for the
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to reduce dependency on the
oil
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extraction.
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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