The exploration and development of alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is considered that people ought to investigate and develop harmless substitutes for fossil fuels.

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priority for humanity.

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essay absolutely agrees with that statement. Not only are fossil fuels are limited,

furthermore

emissions of fossil fuels’ usage

are highly contaminate

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the Earth’s atmosphere. A good reason to explore other sources of energy, and minimize the use of petroleum, gas, and coal, is that these fossil fuels are depleting with a great rate. In fact, nowadays, more and more people prefer cars to bikes and walking,

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ppliance of natural resources increased dramatically

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with the outgone century.

Consequently

, if researchers do not find substitutes for fossil fuels, the world’s progress will stop at that point without energy. Outcomes of that disaster can be tragic. Another point is that developing energy production

such

as solar, hydro and wind power, will prevent detrimental effects of fossil fuels. It is widely known that

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tility of … causes different environmental problems.

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, carbon dioxide release leads to

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radual warming of the surface of the Earth due to greenhouse gases being trapped in the atmosphere above the Earth.

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, it causes

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reenhouse effect.

Moreover

, emissions are toxic

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all creatures. Contaminants, absorbed by people through air and food chain, lead to deceases

such

as asthma, headache, and allergy.

Accordingly

, the average lifespan becomes less than it used to be. To sum up, I strongly believe that it is crucial to search out safe substitutes for fossil fuels to avoid long-range consequences of their limitation and toxicity