Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Marketing appeals

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the audience to

purchase

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the new products, as the big companies spend their billions

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dollars to advertise on

the

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huge level.

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, half of the population say, it is not good as it promotes to buy

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unnecessary things, while others support the advertising as it gives

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information about the new products. I

am partially agree

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partially agree

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with

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statement.

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with, advertising increase the hunger inside a human being to

purchase

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the new launch products. Take

Iphone

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iPhone

as an example, people prefer to buy the new model every year as a status symbol,

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they have

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same brand phone previously which works well. Citizens can use

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money to pay household or credit card bills, to invest or save for their old age,

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of making an extra expense that advertisements cause

now a days

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. Overall, advertising

encourage

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encourages

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people to buy products, that they actually do not need. On the other side,

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arketing approach to

distribute

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information to the ultimate consumers is helping to improve the lifestyle and makes life easy going.

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, Blenders and dough makers are being possible to

purchase

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only because of the advertisements, that people see on the different screens of media. These things save lots of times and energy, which can

be utilize

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on

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doing other chores.

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, doing promotion is necessary to give up to date knowledge to

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society. To conclude, if a person

use

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uses

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his brain and only

purchase

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those items which are required and will work for the longer period as an investment,

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it would not be wrong to say that advertisements

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are the main path to promote the information and uses of the new products and services.