You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - give details of your study plans - explain why you want to get a part-time job - suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Jay, Hope
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letter finds you in radiant health and
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of spirits. I'
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writing to let you know that I'
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coming for my future study in the same country where you are living. Actually, I'
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able to work 20 hours per week during my study. Let me explain my situation, you know my family's financial situation and I don't wanna put more burden on them and
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is the main reason why I'
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interested in
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job.
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, with the help of
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job, I can easily manage my all expenses by myself and it will be
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achievement for me. Would you kindly, help me to find
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ob. Because you are living there for many years and you are totally aware of the area around you. So you can easily find
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part-time work for me by using your contacts. Thank you for your consideration. Yours lovingly, RUSHI
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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