Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: •give some details about the job •mention how you came across the job opportunity •explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend
Dear John,
Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. It’s been a long time since we met. I’m writing this
letter to let you about a job vacancy which I saw in “The New York Times” newspaper yesterday.
Well, this
job is about teaching the English language to an Indian family, who has been leaving
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living
into
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in
this
area for the past 10 years. You have to teach 4 children having
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age
8 to 10 years. There will be no issue if you want to adjust class timings Replace the word
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according to
your study schedule.
I came to know this
job vacancy Change preposition
about this
during
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while
employment
section in the newspaper. Correct article usage
the employment
As
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Last
last
time, you told me about the requirement of a part-time task to fund your education. That’s why I’m referring this
assignment to you because you can do justice to this
task
I feel that this
task would be more suitable for you because you are doing a PhD course in English literature. As you’ve profound knowledge of this
subject so
you can do fair justice to Correct word choice
apply
this
assignment. Apart from that you can expect a deserving salary according to
your calibre.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours lovingly
Puneet SainiSubmitted by john on
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Be more specific about the location or context to create a clearer picture.
coherence cohesion
Consider dividing the second paragraph to enhance readability.
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The letter has a friendly and engaging tone, appropriate for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Clear greeting and closing, maintaining a personal touch.
coherence cohesion
Flows well with logical order, leading from details about the job to why it suits your friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite