A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extend do you agree/ disagree with this option?

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In the past, a
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’s value was determined by the personality, the loving-kindness showed from their soul,
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it has changed dramatically today a
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worth is being estimated from the appearance and the social status. I totally agree with the above statement. According to my opinion, how a
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's worth measurement has been overwhelmingly changed over the past few decades,
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is mainly due to the modern society, generation changes and the inhuman nature of the modern human being. In the Asian culture, the family status greatly contributes to a
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’s value, if one is from a higher family status and a cast the respect that he or she gains is so great. Now in the 21st century, there is a false belief as ''the
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impression is the
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impression''
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is judged by the appearance the way he or she dresses, even in an interview most of the attention is given to the way the
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is dressed. Unlike these days, in the past a human’s worth was determined by the quality of their soul
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can be analyzed after associating with that
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for a while
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cannot be understood just by the appearance.
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, when talking about the trust someone can be trusted if there is a mutual understanding between each other. In the earlier days, a
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is being respected according to the behaviour of that
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. Adults behaviour and their good qualities of life have been a valuable example for their younger generations, that why those days’ children were so obedient and respectful to their parents, unlike the kids who are in
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generation. To sum up, as the world develops human behaviour changes and how people think varies, so how a human worth is determined has changed over the years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social status
  • material possessions
  • traditional values
  • luxurious lifestyles
  • high social standing
  • prioritize
  • trustworthiness
  • values are upheld
  • charity
  • community involvement
  • tight-knit communities
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