Some people argue that technological inventions, such as mobile phones, are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that people are more isolated because of advanced technology

such

as smartphones.

However

, I think that there are some positive impacts followed by innovation.

As a result

, I partially agree with the argument. People rely on the

internet

too much. They use it for business, social, and entertainment. Those things can be done just

in

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a

smart phone

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.

As a result

, it becomes the whole world of them, and they seldom go out anymore.

This

will cause a serious problem that they do not have the social ability and are afraid of face-to-face interaction.

For example

, one of my friends is a homebody. She spent most of her time

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watching

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rama, using social media, and even making

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ew friend on the

internet

. Now, I seldom have the chance to hang out with her, and she

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not know how to talk with us happily.

This

kind of product does make people more isolate than before.

On the other hand

,

those

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technology brings lots of advantages to our life. It not only changes the way we contact

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each other but

also

makes people keep in touch more. People now are using social

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media

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medias

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to catch up

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the latest news of our friends. In

this

case, they know more about each other and talk more easily with the messages.

Furthermore

, it

also

creates a chance to make friends who are sharing the same interests.

For instance

, my friend finds her boyfriend on the

internet

and they are enjoying

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having the same habit.

Lastly

, people can keep in touch

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each other without the barrier of distance. Through video calls, we can chat with friends who are studying abroad.

This

is

also

one method to

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ompany with them. In conclusion,

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technological gadgets make people devolve

them self

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themself

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too much on the

internet

, and they have less will to interact with people face-to-face.

However

, it still builds many chances

to

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people to stay in touch.