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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

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whether museums play a greater role in education or entertainment.In my opinion
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it seems to be both of them acceptable in
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ame pathway as enjoyment or educational.
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ttractive way supporting sound commentaries with
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 used for hunting in "stone age". nobody
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 a great opportunity who do research. anybody can absorb knowledge on ancient history which are portraying powerful strength of our ancestors.Certain museums are fully equipped with electronic access
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 information and trained staff for guidance. to sum up
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bove views it can be easily made a sound environment for education and entertainment.
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