In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?

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With the advent of technology and rapidly increased pace of life, spare
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available to people has reduced drastically. Ambitions of achieving a high-life and excelling at work have
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lead to lesser younger people following the news or reading newspapers. In
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there has been a steep increase in urbanization in recent years.
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lethora of new opportunities being presented to work, which has led to increased competition amongst youngsters for better job opportunities. Everyone needs
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digestible
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, which can be consumed on the go.
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, reading a newspaper or watching
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elatively greater amount of
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, which the millennial generation cannot afford to spare.
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, while it is really convenient to read the news headlines on smartphones and can be done in-between activities, reading a newspaper would require
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ubstantial amount of
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and preferably, a peaceful place as well.
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, a lot of news channels nowadays are fighting to get the top spot among the consumers, leading to the deterioration of the actual
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being presented. Every other article is presented as breaking news and the essence of displaying factual
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has gone for a toss.
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, the majority of the
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presented is negative and violent, since it easily grabs eyeballs.
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, recent news about the suicide of an actor was the headline story on every news channel, many of which displayed disturbing graphic images.
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has repelled the younger population away from televised news. To summarize,
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igher
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required to read the newspaper, coupled with the reduced quality of
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presented on TV, has driven the youngsters away from the news. Having said that, the flexibility provided by
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ontent presented on smartphones has been accepted with open arms and is here to stay.
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