In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
In the
last
few years, due to a change in consumers shopping pattern from local shops to shopping centres and malls, has resulted in a closure of the small shops. In my opinion, Linking Words
this
is a positive development as large malls have not only lead to an increase in employment but have Linking Words
also
become Linking Words
Use synonyms
one stop
solution centre.
Add a hyphen
one-stop
Firstly
, an increase in shopping from malls has generated more employment opportunities. Linking Words
For instance
, as per an article by The New York Times, Walmart, Linking Words
one
of the world's largest retail stores, hires fifteen per cent of America's population. As large supermarkets and malls have more departments, Use synonyms
such
as marketing, finance, operations and sales, which keeps generating the requirement for jobs, Linking Words
hence
, these shopping centres end up hiring more people as compared to local shops.
Linking Words
Secondly
, malls work as a Linking Words
Use synonyms
one stop
solution for consumers. Add a hyphen
one-stop
In other words
, malls have wide options for people including grocery,clothes, electronic equipment and books. Linking Words
Therefore
, most of the customers end up spending more than the budget amount. India is a prime example, where the development of shopping centres and malls have, lead to increasing consumers spend by Linking Words
one
-fourth, Use synonyms
consequently
, making these shopping malls Linking Words
one
of the significant contributors to government revenue.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
this
change in consumer behaviour benefits society as a whole. While malls have increased employment opportunities, they have Linking Words
also
provided people with products under the same roof. Linking Words
Moreover
, with the increased consumer expenditure the contribution of shopping centres to governments revenue has shot up.Linking Words
Submitted by lakhmani.chanda on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?