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interact with each other has changed because of Technology. In what ways has Technology affected personal relationship? Has become a positive or negative development?

#technology #relationship #development
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Dear Gray, In the beginning
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let me introduce myself, I am Nav one who was implicated in a traffic accident at Torbram and Queen road before two months ago. On that day, I was driving a car to
reached
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xamination centre on time, but my car was
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hit
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 by a speedy car when I was waiting for a traffic signal to go. At that time, an angel was sent by God to assist me. I
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 to
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ospital with
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nconscious condition by you, even being a stranger. I would like to appreciate you for
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 act of kindness,
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the word thank you is nothing in front of your generosity and politeness which was
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 towards me at the time of tragedy. My family want to meet you and show gratitude, so we would like to invite you and your family at dinner on
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 Saturday as well as we would have an opportunity to commence a new relationship with the family of kind people. I would like to hear from you and thanks once again. Yours faithfully, Nav
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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