The government should lower the budget on the arts in order to allocate more money to education. To what extent do you agree?
Due to the limits of national budgets, many today are fiercely debating the proper level of funding for the arts and
education
. While some argue that the arts have important historic value, I side with those who recognize the societal value of education
.
On the one hand, many insist that the arts are an important reminder of national history. A good example of this
would be the countless paintings of historic events and key figures that became prominent and fashionable during the Renaissance. These pictures now deepen not only our understanding of those events but also
the psychology and values of the individuals producing and becoming patrons of art at that time. It is therefore
likely that art made today will also
give important clues to future generations as to the history and character of their ancestors.
On the other hand
, education
is the key for
the progress of a nation. Verify preposition usage
to
This
can be most clearly seen in developing countries. After World War II, for instance
, South Korea’s economy was decimated and there were few pathways to a stable nation. The government invested massively in education
and the result is some of the most important companies in the world were founded ranging from Samsung to LG to Hyundai. These companies contribute to the economy and have greatly raised the standard of living for all citizens. I believe efforts to fund education
like the one detailed above have a clear and tangible impact.
In conclusion, art is important for its value in terms of history but education
is by far more important for its economic effects. Governments should strike some balance but prioritise education
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite