You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Harvey, I hope

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letter finds you in great health! With blended feelings of both happiness and sadness, I need to tell you that I will need to postpone my visit to meet you as the much-awaited marriage for my sister has

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been fixed during the second half of

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November month. As you know, Indian

marriages

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traditions are given the utmost importance, being her only real sibling- I need to be present during all the occasions and ceremonies. I am writing

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letter with guilt in my heart that our trips

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will now be postponed as well. I was hoping the marriage dates were late next year-

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, as you know, respecting the conventional customs

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deciding engagement dates

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paramount in our culture. To the wandering thoughts, as you have already taken days off from work, how about if you come to India to witness

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beautiful Indian wedding and the arrangements it comes with

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It will be a nice opportunity as I know you are always excited about Indian weddings. Let me know your plans, as I am sure we both will accommodate something to find each other's way. Warm wishes, Clara

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The letter effectively addresses the task and responds to all prompts.

coherence and cohesion

The coherence and cohesion are strong, but the greeting and closing could be more personalized and warmer.

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grammatical range

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

198 words

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