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Online people write product reviews and opinions about services. Is it a good thing or bad thing?

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It is true that people often establish their opinion about the product or services online for reviewing others or express happiness.
However
, in
this
 essay explain that
this
 positive innovative trend often
make
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 people to aware about
service
 quality and products quantity, and most probably the companies to know about the
feedback
. Since getting an impression from the customers would lead to enhancement of
service
 and let allow them to improvise the wrong comments. Opinion or
feedback
 makes up everything to the
etterment
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betterment
 and flourishes the overwhelming development to the core.
In other words
,
s
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ervice provided by a certain area or purchased product newly should always need recognition to go forward and make more advance. Many people make comments of services whether it is good or bad, or actually how they felt the services make to clarify the failure and feel credit if it is the success.
For instance
,
t
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elephone
company
 introduce customer
service
 station to help clients in the dilemma of new features makes tremendous replays from customers that lead to double the profit of
c
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ompany on that year. Along with some negative effects of services they could remove and renovate
company
 secretory reports on media.
Similarly
, many services and products have limitation to access and some times experience severe technical errors during use. In brief , unlikely, letters or phone call
feedback
 might delay the process and fail to coordinate
theagreement
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the agreement
 in some extend. While online
feedback
 would be fast and secure for both the customers and entrepreneur at a time by information super high way.
For example
, marketing
service
feedback
 of hotel booking site like "Trivago" often reply suddenly the customers queries and suggestions. By the virtue of that, the most significant site of the booking site of the hotel was
this
 which makes dealers happy and
company
 thrive. To sum up, views of services through
i
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nternet or modern technology enhance not only the
company
 development but
also
 customers. At once, old customers to reveal about
service
 and new customers to compare the
service
 with others,
moreover
company
 could have an advantage too.
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