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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreigh countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad oughweigh the drawbacks?

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It is undeniable that more students trend to continue their education in oversea countries. From my point of view, I believe that
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 in foreign countries has advantages more than disadvantages. In the following paragraphs, the reason to support my opinion will be discussed in the detail.
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 with, foreign languages are hard for
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 so people try to go to
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 in the mother of the language country. To example, many pupils when to
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 oversea, they expect that they are able to improve their
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 language faster than learning from books or
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, they could learn and bring back skills and knowledge to improve their own home.
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, it is clear that to live in different a place might cause some problem. To illustrate,
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those who
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 oversea do not understand different in the culture so that always cause arguments.
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 year there was research about 15
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 of the student who went abroad had got homesick because they miss their family and foods. In conclusion, there are some drawbacks in
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 abroad
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 the benefits still outweigh them.
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 topic will cause more arguments in future due to each people point of view.
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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