Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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important role in everyday life. Few people believe that advertising motivates a person to buy things that they really do not need whereas, the others think that the

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tells us about the availability of the product in the

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that may lead to improve our lifestyle. I completely agree that the

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persuades us to purchase things that we do not really want. In

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, advertisements sell the products to us by exaggerating anxieties,

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dvertisement for slim products sometimes describe a slim body as the only to looks perfect by decrease the weight, which is not true. But the overweighted girls who saw these advertisements will feel more excited and

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buy the products to feel happy.

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, in order to sell more products, the products are unnecessarily divided into various subcategories.

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method of selling is most used in beauty products. The

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tells you that there should be four steps when you clean your face, and the result is that people have to buy 4 facial products.

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, previously one bottle could be enough.

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agencies are very good at reinventing an existing fact by giving it a new name. The new name implies that it is a new thing to try. In that way, people keep things, without awareness, that they may already possess. To conclude, the

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three ways of advertisements can pursue people to buy products which we do not really need. They only do to complete their targets and increase their sales. I hope we should focus on our real needs and should prevent to waste money on unwanted things.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

encourage
persuade
manipulative
unnecessary
excessive
artificial needs
desires
consumers
oversaturation
impulse buying
financial problems
inform
educate
features
benefits
innovations
raise awareness
social issues
positive behavior
enrich
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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Fully explain your ideas

Some children spend hourse everyday on their smartphones.why is this case? Do you think is a positive or negative ?

Your local newspaper had an advertisement asking people to help with environmental projects in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. Describe a local environmental issue Explain how you can help Suggest how to avoid the problem in future

In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think money is one of the most essential factors in promoting hapinness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?