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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crime in society. To what etent do you agree or disagree with this issue.

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Ever since the beginning of human civilization, crime has been a part of our lives. More so, media is
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 a major contributor to portray violence in our society. Some people believe that the government should introduce policies to control the extent of
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 hate and aggression generating movies to which I completely agree. In
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 essay,I will address the same.
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irst and foremost crucial reason to put a ban on
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 cinema is that it has an enormous tendency to influence common man.
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, most individuals learn the wrong and are inspired to take an action.
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, events in the past have occurred where some ill-elements of the society has done a crime as portrayed in a certain movie.
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, in India, all the events of the famous 9/11 bombing happened were a complete imitation of a popular Bollywood film based on terrorism. In my opinion,
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 kind of hateful cinema needs proper surveillance from the authorities because it impacts the children negatively.
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 is so because of continuous exposure to the fighting scenes, the youngsters could develop negative feelings,
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, rage, aggression, violence and become impatient. In conclusion,
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, there are many other reasons like psychological imbalance in a person that leads to misdeed but, excessive violence projected through the media has a great effect on the mindset of the society. Film and television industry has always been responsible to reach the heads of the masses so, precautions are needed to be taken with the content.
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