There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?

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in contemporary society,technology is giving many things to mankind. when it comes to mobile phones ,people are addict with
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type of sources. like,phones ,laptops,and computers.that has a negative impact on social heart ,medical and technical. in
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essay , I will perspective from both sides positive and negative .
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,outweigh the advantages. there are many advantages of using a cell phone .
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, mobile phones are crucial in today era . it will connect all relatives to all across the world. we can relax from listening
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the music. natural calamities like drought, earthquakes,and so on. we can call to supervisor for help within minutes.
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, the mobile phone is important in leisure time that we can give our time to relax our body
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,message , game,camera,recording and internet.
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, we can do the transition from home to another person in less time. cell phones
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provide entertainment show ,tv program , youtube, and etc.
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, mobile phones have negative impacts on growth .according researchers , using phones have an awful impact on growth
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,cancer risk, mental and ear problems .
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,children are totally distracted from the classroom and drivers on the road . as well as , disconnect from social growth . on balance , mobile phones have a negative impact on social and health .
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, we know that how and when we have to use mobile phones that we cant face
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a problem. definitely outweigh the advantages
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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