Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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many are of the opinion that parents should motivate their children to participate in

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activities in their free

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, others believe that children should be taught to spend

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with themselves. In my opinion, children should be uplifted to be a

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of

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activities during their spare

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, as it helps their overall growth. On the one hand, some people think that encouraging kids to be a

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of

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tasks, will result in, teaching them sportsmanship spirit and

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team work

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and I agree.

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roup teaches the art of sharing and coming to the desired result by

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bonding.

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, Steve Jobs and Bill Gates, the world's wealthiest business tycoons, came up with their best products through a combined

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effort.

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, another reason for encouraging

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activity is that it not only helps children learn from others but

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teaches the art of putting across their viewpoints.

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, it is often believed that children should be encouraged to spend free

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on their own, which is due to the following reasons.

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, it helps them discover their creative side. To illustrate, most of the globally renowned artists have claimed, their masterpieces came into life by occupying themselves in their own thoughts.

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, spending free

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with oneself as a child prepares them to enjoy their own company. Unfortunately, the maximum cases of depression amongst adults are due to loneliness,

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, if kids learn to be a

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of their own company at a young age,

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will help them fight any social battle in the future. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that sportsmanship is very important and should be taught to children at a young age.

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, apart from the

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spent on studies any free

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should be utilised to inspire children to be a

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of

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activities. As it nourishes them to be a better person.