Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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arents duty to make children a perfect human of a community, while there are others who think education institutions have the responsibility to do

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, in my opinion, I assumed that both can play inevitable roles to build up children as a great human being. On the one hand, many think children can get every life-lesson from their family members as well as from parents. It is very true that learning can start from the family and socialization process

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begins from a very early age or inherited from parents.Children can learn social values, ethical knowledge, good behaviour and so on from their parents which are handy for children's cognition. Family is the

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platform which provides basic and informal learning to children.

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, children's mental health and behaviour

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on their

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attitude.

On the other hand

, educational institutions

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as schools,

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contribution to make children a perfect human being. After entering the school children can get huge surroundings

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teachers, peers and so on. Children can find various people with different views and mentalities. They are trying to develop their socialization process from that stage. The rules, regulations and discipline can make children punctual.

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chool can provide students

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how to be a good future leader. By obeying pedagogs instruction, it might

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their tolerance ability, co-operative mentality might be improved by helping other peers.

Finally

, in my opinion, it would be said that children as well as all human beings are in debt to their family and educational institutions. Because our attitude, views, philosophy and ideology are developed by them. They are becoming civilized and socialized by both parents and teachers. They

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start knowing how to respect elders and senior citizens. In conclusion, despite people having different views on

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topic, I would say that it is not only parents responsibility but

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education institutions are responsible to make them a good human being for our society.