Some people think it is better to choose friend who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss bot these views and give your own opinion .

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Nowadays, the groups of friends sometimes are really big and everyone will have his way to do
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things or to think. Even though many people think that you should gather just with friends who have a lot of similarities with you others think
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better to meet with people who have different points of view. In
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I will
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discuss the advantages and
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that both could bring and give my own opinion. There are some friends who have a lot of things in common
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the way they dress up, same hobbies or even they have the same thought.
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feeling supported by someone.
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, if people just focus on
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others with the same opinions could have its drawbacks
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as not be open to meet other people because they could think in
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ifferent way than them. In another hand, it is good to have friends with different points of view, that could make you
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understand sometimes that you are not right in everything you do and help you to change your
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, people who sometimes disagree with your opinion tend to be more honest just to help others. To sum up, I think that either people who disagree or agree with you is good to have in your life,
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, you will not see the different opinions that could help you.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • like-minded
  • shared beliefs
  • reinforcement
  • conflict avoidance
  • emotional support
  • social activities
  • diverse perspectives
  • personal growth
  • challenging conversations
  • open-mindedness
  • critical thinking
  • negotiate
  • core values
  • healthy debate
  • enriching experiences
  • personal development
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