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Nowadays, The globe’s atmospheric

pollution

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increase

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dramatically. In my

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the use of fossil

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to commute are two main causes. These factors will lead to poor

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globally which contribute to

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and human

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two causes of pouring

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. The primary cause of poor

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is the overwhelming

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of fossil

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globally. Many sectors in human life

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fossil

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as a primary energy resource.

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petrol or coal as the energy for production. In

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zillion of

carbon

dioxide and methane are emitted to the atmosphere. Take housewives in using coals as

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energy for cooking as another sample. They

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resulting

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from their cooking process. The second main cause is

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in commuting. Based on the data from

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25 %

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for commuting it will be

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effect to our planet and will decrease the quality of oxygen in the

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air

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, especially for our

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impact of

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will melt which make

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surface increase over the

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. we will disappear of many islands which are located surrounding the sea. Regarding

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the human

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, the rising of the temperature and the overwhelming of

carbon

dioxide contribute to many diseases in

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. One of which is

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such

as infection of respiratory acute and chronic, cancer lung

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so on.

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will contribute to decreasing of quality of life and death among children and infants.

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emission is emitted the more disadvantages for our health and

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we will get. In conclusion, there are many factors contributing to the

world

’s

air

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for commuting.

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death

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among children and

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human wellbeing