Nowadays nurses should not just be required to do basic training but they must have other qualities as well to do their jobs well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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, due to the outbreak of the coronavirus, we can see a lot of problems and disadvantages of the health care system. One of them is a huge deficit of professional staff.

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, many people think,

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required to do basic training for medical workers is not enough and nurses should have other qualities to do their job well. I totally agree with

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of all, as the most taking care of a patient person, a nurse should be able to help mentally as well as physically.

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, a good joke or unexpectable compliment may help even better than a drug. Unfortunately, health care workers have huge stress. So, it may be difficult for them to be calm and positive all the time and keep their patients in a good mood.

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, I think, it would be great, if the nurses could meditate or do other psychological tricks to keeping calm during the workday.

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, treatment instructions are changing, new devices and instruments are arising.

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why nurses should learn a lot

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the latest information and acquire new skills. As I have mentioned before, the outbreak of the coronavirus shows, that a majority of the medical staff does not have enough skills and knowledge for working with specific equipment.

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, in my country,there are no special studying courses. I wish,

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problem were solved. In conclusion, there is a lot of problems, which nurses face today . To improve a taking responsibility of medicine workers should not only acquire new skills but

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learn how to keep calm and be positive with patients.

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why, I agree nurses should have many different qualities,

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basic, to do their jobs better.

o.m.gakh

Oct 18, 2020

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