Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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In today's world,

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has become a significant tool for marketing a product. While some believe that

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increases awareness about products that may improve our lives, others argue that

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induces people to buy things they do not really need. I strongly believe that the latter is more correct, as it will be explained in

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essay. To promote a commodity, companies generally propagate only its bright side,

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providing an incomplete image of the product. If only positive aspects are known,

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there is an inclination to buy that particular product and one ends up purchasing something which is not required. Take

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herbal products and weight loss supplements. In data published by the magazine India Today, the use of herbal products to reduce weight has seen

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ignificant increase in the recent years, whereas health experts are of the opinion that weight can only be controlled through proper diet and exercise. Many of my friends who used

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medicines have later repented their choice.

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, children are easily attracted by advertisements. Nowadays, most of the teenagers like to own a smartphone which is a result of

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ass announcement. Recently a school in

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K banned children from using mobile phones inside school premises, as cellphones were the major cause of distraction which affected their studies. In conclusion, it can be said that an

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creates an impression on

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onsumer's mind and people end up buying an undesired good.

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thorough research before buying is strongly recommended.

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Example
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.5

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Fully explain your ideas

have your experience any festival or occasion in different country ? What type of experience you have learnt from it ?

Universities should accept equal numbers of men and women in every subject. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Science is important in the 21st century. How do you think it could be made more appealing to young people?

Prevention is better than cure" Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.