Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In

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contemporary era, it is a modern fashion trait to put aged people in elderly homes because their families

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after their elders. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss

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erits and demerits of

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trend. On the one hand, there are several benefits to send grey-haired people in care homes.

Firstly

, old aged people spend their leisure time with their age mates because in the

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the family members have no more time to spend with their parents because of

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ectic schedule .

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, when they talked with their colleagues they feel relax and they can easily talk with them . They don't feel any

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while talk because all people in

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ame aged . But

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many grandparents do not talk with their grandchildren due to distance in age and they don't understand each in

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modern era because of thinking. So, in elder homes

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they spend cherished moments with their age mates. On the

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hand, there are some drawbacks of put in old aged homes .

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sometimes they feel isolated in elder homes because of

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in their families.

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in many elder peoples are in mental stress in old aged homes.

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, children have

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do not

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about their history and traditions because they have no one to give information about history.

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, grandchildren feel alone in their houses because parents are busy in their jobs and grandparents are nursing homes . So they feel isolated at

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. In conclusion, there are both pros and cons of

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aged people in elder care. I think its depend on the children to send their parents

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care or not.