Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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is increased heavily by humans. The major reasons for
such
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ncrease in demand and supply of every other product available in
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led us to
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igh demand
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goods. In the UK, Europe, and Central Asia, approximately 25 babies are born every minute. The numbers are pretty high
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when statistics are considered globally.
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drastic population growth and its direct proportionate effect on
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waste
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that the percentage of
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Manufacturing companies, hospitals, e-commerce departments and chemical factories is particularly high. These wastes
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also
called as e-
waste
and medical-
waste
are particularly very dangerous to the earth's crust, as these wastes are non-biodegradable. In developed countries like
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SA, due to the vast establishment of
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waste
producing companies, the percentage of
waste
produced is more.
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, the usage of non-reusable day-to-day products
such
as plastic cutlery, electronic devices, and plastic bags is high.
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humans, they are more dangerous and a very high percentage of garbage is accumulated. Improvising the Recycling methods throughout the world
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is one good change that would highly help reduce
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waste
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invested highly in
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etterment of recycling and succeeded in achieving good results.
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should establish a law which
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the
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from every manufacturer and
also
provide better financial support to enhance recycling strategies. In conclusion,
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waste
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future generations. Each and every individual should recycle
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waste
responsibly. Government support is highly important in improvising the Recycling system and ought to restrict high
waste
manufacturing companies.
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