Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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waste of production, in the
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topic at government meetings. The
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growth of
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population
and the intensify consumption of
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superficial
goods are the principal reason for the production of more
rubbish
.
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all the
population
and generations,
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, Estates are searching
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different ways to reduce that
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matter
.
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, the world
population
has raised very fast in the
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few years.
Consequently
, has increased the
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consumption
of food and goods that produce a lot of
rubbish
. Some country’s,
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has a large number of inhabitants, the garbage is thrown away if
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rong
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, affecting the river and ground.
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because the Estate can not afford the basic structure of life for some
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part
parts
of
population
, creating favelas, for
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example
.
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, since the industrial revolution
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the
population
faced a new
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of
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consumption
. In
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950’s it wasn’t common the
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habit
of
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buy new objects every month,
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expend a lot of money in
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superficial
goods. Nowadays, society is accustomed to see new releases every day and be
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to buy it. Equally important, the raise of production has affected the
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environment
due to the
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plastic
use. As a matter of fact, all governments delayed a solution
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this
theme. Nowadays, we can see
that is
more common the Estates talk about the growth of
rubbish
and how it can affect our habitat. Some country’s as Canada and Brazil are
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committed
with the
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of
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plastics
, prohibit their use until 2022. Another
way
is the Estate to create a fee over non- recycled waste, encouraging the
population
to separate correctly
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the
their
garbage. To summary, the
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of
population
and a new
way
of
consuption
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consumption
has helped the growth of
rubbish
in a lot of
countys
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counties
. The Estate is now essential to prevent that keep happening,
furthermore
is time to act not just think in what can be made.
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