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lifestyle
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. Sedentary lifestyles appear to be increasingly widespread in many nations despite being linked to a range of chronic health conditions. From an individual perspective, I extremely agree Fix the agreement mistake
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this
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people
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, as the research is starting to confirm Linking Words
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people
do not meet the minimum physical activity guidelines and are at risk of developing well-being issues from spending too much time being sedentary. Use synonyms
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, physical inactivity is the primary Linking Words
cause
of most health problems. Use synonyms
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exercise Fix the agreement mistake
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that is
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people
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it is even harder for them to sit properly Punctuation problem
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in
a long time. Change preposition
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, in bad blood circulation and even obesity. It will Linking Words
cause
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a
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On the flip side, some argue that the sedentary Check wording
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lifestyle
in offices is not the direct Use synonyms
causes
of a lot of diseases. They claim that Fix the agreement mistake
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although
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while
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,
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In conclusion, it is reasonable to say that a sedentary Replace the word
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lifestyle
is the direct Use synonyms
cause
of a number of diseases. I believe that Use synonyms
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and
many of the aforementioned diseases could be avoided by changing our Punctuation problem
, and
styles
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lifestyles