Many of the medical problems that people are experiencing in today's world are due to the fact that we have a very sedentary lifestyle. To what extent to you agree?To

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. Sedentary lifestyles appear to be increasingly widespread in many nations despite being linked to a range of chronic health conditions. From an individual perspective, I extremely agree

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statement. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will explain my viewpoint with relevant examples. To commence

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there are some other causes of why

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have medical problems.

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, as the research is starting to confirm

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well-being risks associated with sedentary behaviour can contribute to obesity. To illustrate, many

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do not meet the minimum physical activity guidelines and are at risk of developing well-being issues from spending too much time being sedentary.

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, working long hours and spending time without movement or having a break.

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, physical inactivity is the primary

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of most health problems.

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, some

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are lacking

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exercise

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essential to personal happiness.

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but not least,

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backaches, neck aches

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a few

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have a good sitting habit

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it is even harder for them to sit properly

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a long time.

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, in bad blood circulation and even obesity. It will

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. On the flip side, some argue that the sedentary

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in offices is not the direct

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of a lot of diseases. They claim that

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office work requires them to sit for long, they can relax and exercise their body

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they are working or during break times.

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, the company provides fitness for

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employee to ensure that they have a good physically and mentally

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to have an activity. In conclusion, it is reasonable to say that a sedentary

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is the direct

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of a number of diseases. I believe that

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is a choice

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many of the aforementioned diseases could be avoided by changing our

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.