People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society ? How can we create an ideal society?

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always dreams about the creation of an ideal

society

,

however

, in many cases people have difficulties with its implementation. In

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essay, I am going to formulate my own opinion about

this

kind of

society

and give some suggestions for its creation.

First

of all, every person has his or her own understanding of an ideal world, so it is impossible to generalize it.

Nonetheless

, I can define what it means for me. According to

me

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humble opinion, a perfect

society

is a place which is free from violence, wars, cruelty, and selfishness.

For example

, members of it will never let themselves to act dishonestly or unfairly, they will always obey the laws and think, care about others well-being.

Furthermore

, all people will be surrounded by love, help, respect, and support.

Thus

, for me

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an ideal

society

is something kind, pure and clear, but I doubt if it is real to achieve it. According to possible ways

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making it,

firstly

, people can start to control their thoughts and actions. It is well-known that

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self-control is the most powerful instrument for

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personality changes.

For example

, some researches have proved that positive thoughts can change a person`s attitude to some situations and to

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life at large.

Likewise

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overnment should encourage their citizens to take part in voluntary work as people will be aware

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social problems and will be empowered to put efforts for their tackling.

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, some people have no idea about

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starvation in Africa, but they have resources and wish to help. Due to assumptions in several decades or centuries an ideal

society

can be created. To sum up, I think that

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perfect world is a place where people are kind to each other and ready to help without getting any benefits. As far as I concerned, it can be reached by

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self-control of every person and voluntary work.

Nevertheless

, it is not a full list and other better approaches can be offered.