You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: state your reason for writing describe the problem and your concerns explain what you would like the Principal to do.

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Dear Mr Nars, I am writing

this

letter with regards to express my disappointment in hearing that the work placement programme held every summer has vanished

this

year. One of the main reasons I chose your school, among the many, in New Zealand was because of the work placement programme offered under my Business English course. I am majorly concerned about losing the opportunity to gain practical insights into my course along with the chance to develop and engage with local people by utilising my course knowledge. I particularly selected your school and incurred extra expenses for

this

golden chance of placements, and if

this

is not getting offered-

then

I am been frauded. I would

therefore

humbly request if you could possibly look into reopening the summer placement programme again,

otherwise

, I should be getting my money back as I am not getting offered based on what was advertised. I will look forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Carol

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