Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: • how you know about this city/town • what information was incorrect • what the editor should do about this.

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letter to complain against the wrong information about the Ambala city which you have published in your newspaper dated 24th august 2019. I have been living in

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city for the past 10 years. I have been working as Traffic in charge for the past 5 years.

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, I know each and every accomplishment and social

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town comprehensively.

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was shocking news for me when your magazine declared

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town as the most polluted place

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the country.

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, I visited the state government office and check all the

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facts and information.

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, I am completely convinced that your newspaper has published false information. Could you publish another article to feel apologize to city dwellers so that their feelings and emotions do not get hurt?

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, you should advise your printing supervisor to keep a check on daily published news.

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, I believe that your journal will not repeat

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serious mistake again in future. Yours faithfully Puneet Saini

johnTue Oct 20 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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170 words

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