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Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: • how you know about this city/town • what information was incorrect • what the editor should do about this.

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 letter to complain against the wrong information about the Ambala city which you have published in your newspaper dated 24th august 2019. I have been living in
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 city for the past 10 years. I have been working as Traffic in charge for the past 5 years.
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, I know each and every accomplishment and social
problems
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 of
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 town comprehensively.
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,
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 was shocking news for me when your magazine declared
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 town as the most polluted place
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 the country.
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, I visited the state government office and check all the
concern
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 facts and information.
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, I am completely convinced that your newspaper has published false information. Could you publish another article to feel apologize to city dwellers so that their feelings and emotions do not get hurt?
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, you should advise your printing supervisor to keep a check on daily published news.
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, I believe that your journal will not repeat
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 serious mistake again in future. Yours faithfully Puneet Saini

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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