You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

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Dear Sir, My name is John Smith and I have been rented a flat in Mississagua near green park from your agency for one year. I am writing

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letter to inform you that due to some emergency I have to break the contract as I am going back to my country, India. My rental agreement is for one year and it's been nine months

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am living in

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flat. I would say,

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the apartment is small, it is nice and cosy.Everything is well maintained with upmarket infrastructure. and it gives me a feeling of home. Unfortunately, my manager asked me to go back to Indian headquarters earlier than planned, to handle a major project from 1st of

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November. As of now, I am unable to stay here until the time mentioned in the contract. I have to leave my apartment on the 27th of October to reach India on time. I would

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if you release me early. I am aware

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is against your policy but I hope you will understand my problem and still refund my deposit. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John Smith

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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Living in a country where zou have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this statement?

Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What are the reasons for this and how can the problem be tackled?

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