You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing in regards to the printer I bought from your shop

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week on the 14th of November, 2020. The printer was working fine for the

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three days, but later its speed reduced and the paper started getting stuck in the machine.

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, even after giving a command for double-side printing, it prints only on one side, resulting in a waste of paper. As my job involves tax filing it requires printing of a large number of documents, which needs to be submitted to the government officials monthly.

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, due to a problem in printing the filing of documents is getting delayed and the repercussion of it is a cancellation of my work permit.

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, the equipment is under its warranty period,

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I would really appreciate it if you could replace it with a new one. If replacing is not an option, in that case, request you to please send in your staff member to repair it. Looking forward to your prompt response. Yours Sincerely, Chanda Lakhani

lakhmani.chandaTue Oct 20 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

173 words

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