Some sports are considered extremely dangerous, but many people still like them. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
There is no doubt that doing sports has a crucial impact on our physical and mental well-being.
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interest despite their dangerous effect and what measures can be taken to mitigate them.
One of the main factors for participating in dangerous activities is to be famous. Individuals who like to be in the entre of attention find doing risky or combative sports as a way to reach their goal. Contact sports, Linking Words
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the reason behind the interest in doing harmful exercise, there are two main steps that can be taken to solve that. Linking Words
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, the government can ban activities which are truly harmful. Linking Words
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, in the United States, some type of wrestling in which athletes combat and injure an opponent is stopped. Linking Words
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for their impact on spreading violence in societies. Another solution can be done by social media. They can encourage communities to do sportive entertainment rather than combative. Producing documentaries about a fitness issue that athletes have been suffered from is of great help.
In conclusion, some sports have a detrimental effect on our well-being. People who tend to be fame are interested in doing that. Linking Words
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, it is reasonable that they would be limited by authorities and the public should be aware of health problems through media.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...