Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinions.

Advertisement plays a vital role in promoting the brands and their vast variety of products. According to certain individuals, advertising accelerates the sale of goods while others do not find it much effective in today’s world. The same will be illustrated in the following passages thoroughly. To start with, promoting the stuff is very important in
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competitive world where there are enormous numbers of items is similar. Advertisements make basic features of the item clear by advertisements and endorsing the product through especially hired brand ambassadors mostly Actors, athletes in order to attract the consumers. Sometimes, people buy the product because their favourite personality is campaigning for it. In contrary, it is believed that advertising is not taken as attentive as it was
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ong way back as the society has become more practical as genuine details including the practical implications are gathered by the consumers by various means mainly internets, discussions with professional consultants and various other platforms before buying because advertisements only portray the positive aspects of the products keeping other important features aside. The Internet is an important medium to find the minute details of the desired product and to make decisions in accordance with one’s own observation. In
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engaged world. In conclusion, advertising somewhere offers competition among the companies and attracts masses,
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it has not proved to be an effective technique to strengthen the trust between the users when real-time observations are given more weightage than hypothetical advertisements for decision making of the buyers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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