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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The
internet
 is so comprehensive and popular that most
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eople choose to read free resources from their digital appliances rather than paper ones
such
 as newspapers and books.
Although
 there are many benefits in using smart gadgets, I think that printed one still has its value.
As a result
, I partially disagree with the point. Online resources make lots of positive impacts
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 our life.
Firstly
, it is easy to approach. You only need to connect to the
internet
,
then
 you can search for any information or ask for questions.
Secondly
, there are numerous resources you can use.
For example
, you can visit the New York Time website to read
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ews.
Finally
, you can have a variety of data at the same time. People can not only choose the most
favorite
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 page but
also
 compare the difference between each idea.
Therefore
, the
internet
 makes us having more convenience and resources to gain knowledge.
On the other hand
, printed publications
also
 have
its
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 value. Part of people
prefer
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 the feeling of holding a book and turning a page. It has more sense of reality.
Besides
, they can
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 the sentences or words they like.
For instance
, one of my friends is a bookworm, and she loves to bookmark the words.
Thus
, she really enjoys the pleasure which is bringing from books.
Furthermore
, books and newspapers are more organized than the information on the
internet
. People can absorb knowledge more efficiently and effectively. It still has its advantages, though printed one
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 to pay money. In conclusion, online pages are so convenient and variety that people can receive information quickly without any cost.
However
, I believe that paper news and books have different functions and benefits to people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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