Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Advertisements are the main source of income for the producers as well as the consumers. Decades ago, newspapers were the only source of advertisements , later came the televisions, so the people were not aware of the new products in the
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which is growing medium for the new products. Indeed , people today are aware of
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new product longe in the
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with their advantages and disadvantages. Awareness is the key to stay up to date with new products in
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arket through advertisements. People today have perplexed view of advertising new product. Few Of them believe the advertisement has a negative impact as well as a positive outlook. Televisions usually forecast the advertisement after every interval of 10 minutes of shows or a movie. The producers of the ads pay a huge amount to endorse their brands of the new products . They make ads by endorsing the top actors ,athletes , footballers and crickets who have the most number of fan following.
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buying the products even if they least need it.
On the other hand
, if there were no advertisements it would have been difficult for us to get acquaint to the new products in the
market
, the discount the company’s are offering, the better model of phones with new features , the automatic in house light systems , the
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which has improved our lives with a sound of our voice, it follows our commands and makes our lives easier.
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knowledge of electronic and gadgets would not have been possible without television, newspapers, social media advertising. So, advertising is and will always be an important
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of our lives .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • persuade
  • manipulative
  • unnecessary
  • excessive
  • artificial needs
  • desires
  • consumers
  • oversaturation
  • impulse buying
  • financial problems
  • inform
  • educate
  • features
  • benefits
  • innovations
  • raise awareness
  • social issues
  • positive behavior
  • enrich
  • well-being
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