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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #governments #amount
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 of waste produced by us is significantly more that it used to be. Which is a severely affecting global warning and
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nature. The rubbish produced by humans is generally in the form of household
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, excess oils from industrial areas thrown in the water, usage of non-recyclable materials
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 of
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 collected from every house etc. There are plenty of reasons responsible for
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 increment in
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 science a decade.
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, the usage of the products like bags and coverings used to deliver food items or any other home-delivered items which we
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 on the daily basis. Most of us
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 the sort of items as one time
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 only which considered as
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 after the
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 the
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 collection from each house is dangerously increasing every day which is a bigger threat to
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nature and wildlife as well to
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 certain extent. A considerable
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 of
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 which contains products made of plastic is consumed by animals around which leads to severe illness or deaths in some cases. Plastic is non-disposable material which is why it is harmful to nature in many uncontrollable ways.
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there are some solutions by which
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 can be reduced.
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 as, ban the usage of plastic in the production of products like covering, bags, cups, dishes etc which are used daily by humans.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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