Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Increase in population has caused land pollution, water pollution and air pollution
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decades.
Rise
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The rise
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in population causes demand for more consumption of food, use of bags, demand for hospital materials, supply for factory materials which in turn causes growth of production of unwanted material leading to
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urge of
waste
. The
waste
collected from houses, hotels, factories, hospitals etc are all dumped in the waters, on an open yard and sometimes they are put on fire. The main reason for the surge of the
waste
product is
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ack of knowledge and awareness of the use of recyclable products. The government should spread awareness about the reduction in
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arbage ,by television, newspapers, social media etc . The government should impose a law to most
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ompanies to make recyclable materials. The manufacturing
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should product home appliances which can be recycled. The garbage bags in the house should be made of materials which can be recycled rather than plastic. So that it can be reused and not be thrown in the rubbish, The use of
waste
food product can be used in the biogas system. The hospital materials used as medication in the form of tablets, syringes,
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, face masks etc used
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be made of recyclable materials. The factories invest lots of money for the production of many materials, that would too profit with
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if they
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and
recycled
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their materials. In my opinion
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the best way to reduce the increase in
waste
is through reusing the materials and products as mentioned above. I have been using broken pots as a decorative item in my house, used bottles to grow plants in it, printed papers to reuse it as note pad, pieces of unused clothing to clean the house. Recycling is the best and the most effective way to reduce the increase in the
waste
produced.
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