Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?

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affluent nations in terms of health and education, developed countries may step in to help and solve

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with, enhancing education can be done through extensive exchange programs. Sending teachers to developing countries overseas may greatly improve schools and teaching methods through exchanging expertise. To illustrate, back in the sixties, Egypt had sent tutors to Gulf countries

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as Saudi Arabia and Kuwait in order to refine the curriculum and the overall educational process.

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, many Saudis witnessed an improvement in the quality of their educational facilities,

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encouraging many of their children to attend schools,

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progressing to higher education.

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, rich countries can aid nations which suffer from catastrophic events. Famine, tsunamis and earthquakes impose great dangers on some populations. Raising funds to alleviate the results of

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incidents is a crucial measure.

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ew years ago, an earthquake hit the country of Haiti, causing detrimental impacts on the lives of many citizens. Several nations helped in many ways, sending medical supplies and raising funds which helped those who lived in affected areas. To conclude, affluent countries play a key role in improving the conditions of

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can be done through financial support and

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exchange programs supported by embassies.