Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that financial support provided to artists by the state can be used somewhere else, while others think that artists should be supported by the

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, I believe that artists should be supported because they do not have a permanent source of income. On the one hand, there are more prominent issues,

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as health, education, infrastructure etc, which needs

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funding. Spending tax money to address these issues would provide the benefit to a large portion of

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opulation.

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would result in an improved lifestyle for the people which, in turn, would help the country's economy to grow in the future.

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, in a recent report issued by the World Bank, it is reported that Pakistan's GDP has increased for the

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has invested Rs. 100 billion on education and hospitals in the

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5 years.

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, I believe that stopping support for the artists to solve those issues is not a good solution because artists earnings depend on their demand .

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, artists,

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as actors, musicians, painters etc, earn their livelihood because of the talent they possess. As long as their talent is appreciated among the audience, it will allow them to earn their bread and butter.

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means that they do not have guaranteed income as compared to other professionals working in the corporate world.

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, once their demand decreases, they would start to struggle financially.

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year, one of the biggest comedians in Pakistan died in his house because he had no money to get the treatment for his disease. I believe that

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overnment should establish some kind of fund through which all artists can be funded. In conclusion, while the state has to provide funding to more important matters like health and education, artists funding should not be stopped because they do not have a fixed income through which they can support themselves.