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Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People have different views about how the states have to provide the need of the population for nutrition. I strongly believe that the
food
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 supply of the residents should be ensured by their countries. The authorities of each state have to try meeting the cuisine needs of the population with manufacturing inside the
country
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 as possible as. Probably, the manufacture of the feed products could require a considerable investment in its
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 stage, but it is
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 the way to avoid much more expenditure for importing products.
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, the state could save a significant amount of money spent on the delivery of the products as well as additional taxes accounted for the real prices of the products.
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, the improvement of the
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 industry in the
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 can be the
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 step for the elimination of dependency from the other states. While the countries import the crucial
food
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 needs from the other countries, the rate of the dependency from the other states is apparently increasing not only in terms of economy but
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 in relation to political issues.
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, the importing state is in the war conditions, the exporting
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 can impact the political decisions of that
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 in a significant degree which is the result of the dependency in both industrial and political fields. In conclusion,
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 self- sufficiency in the
food
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 industry can be difficult in terms of financial issues in the beginning, I firmly agree that the countries should supply the people's meal considering the positive effects
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 as saving money and enough independence.
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