Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea, some think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? Give examples of your knowledge.

Plastic
products have become widespread nowadays and the problem of damage they contribute to our
invironment
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environment
is more acute than ever. For the great majority of people
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it is evident that our land, oceans and seas suffer
of
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plastic
shopping bags, which is being used worldwide. In my opinion,
them
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should be banned and replaced with
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co-friendly substitute. The
first
thing that needs to be said is the usage of
plastic
bags have a negative impact on the environment because it releases toxic components and takes a long time to decompose.
This
material is being accumulated into the soil or eaten by animals or fish.
As a result
, the soil became intoxicated and unfruitful, while animals are being poisoned and eventually dead. There are a lot of examples on the internet we can find where researchers, rescuers or volunteers try to safe animal's lives suffered from eaten
plastic
bags. Another way of looking at the question is that
plastic
bags are the most suitable for their cost producing. The process of manufacturing is less expensive and easier compared to glass, metal or other material.
Additionally
, having accumulated a great amount of
this
product, humanity
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not bother to recycle it in a proper manner. From my own experience, I have refused the usage of
plastic
bags at all and use a natural fabric shopping bag. To draw the conclusion, one can say that the damage of using
plastic
bags prevails on its cost benefits and the best decision is to replace them to ecologically natural items.
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