You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to you in
hope
you can share more details of the construction of a Shopping centre on Baycrest Ave with Bathurst. I assume that, as a council, you have more information than what has been circulating in the Add an article
the hope
neigborhood
.
The plan to build a Shopping Mall in Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
such
small
space was brought to me by some friends, who live nearby. I assume the developers have Correct article usage
a small
Correct your spelling
bought
bough
some of the properties Correct your spelling
bought
next
to the intended location; However
, I do not feel that a Mall is suitable in such
residential
area as it could create a disruption in our calm and peaceful Correct article usage
a residential
neighborhood
. And would Change the spelling
neighbourhood
also
bring several problems, such
as a high increase in traffic in the area.
Could you please send me more information about the construction plan? Also
, if possible, it would be great if you could keep me updated on this
matter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Nicolas Motta.Submitted by nicolasmottasi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite