You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to you in

hope

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you can share more details of the construction of a Shopping centre on Baycrest Ave with Bathurst. I assume that, as a council, you have more information than what has been circulating in the

neigborhood

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neighbourhood

. The plan to build a Shopping Mall in

such

small

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space was brought to me by some friends, who live nearby. I assume the developers have

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bought

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bough

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bought

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some of the properties

to the intended location;

However

, I do not feel that a Mall is suitable in

such

residential

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area as it could create a disruption in our calm and peaceful

neighborhood

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. And would

also

bring several problems,

such

as a high increase in traffic in the area. Could you please send me more information about the construction plan?

Also

, if possible, it would be great if you could keep me updated on

this

matter. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Nicolas Motta.

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in additional
moreover
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for example
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therefore
however
although
even though
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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

162 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.

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