Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matter that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The table reveals the information of GDP through the sectoral distribution in 1992 and the line graph depicts the movements of GDP between 1986 and 1995. Overall, it can be seen that GDP is earned primarily by the service
. It produces more GDP than any other
. It is important to note that natural resources had the highest numbers od employees but it produced lesser GDP as compared to the service
. It was almost three times lesser only 19.2% against 58% of services. The employment in services was only at 15.2% than 77.4% of natural resources. The employment in the industry
was lower as compared to its GDP production. It was 15.4% quite similar to the natural resources,
, its GDP was at 36%, which is higher.
On the other hand
, the percentage of GDP in services was at a peak in the initial years,
it started declining gradually throughout the period.
, the natural resources produced more GDP in its
years than industry. It provided almost a quarter percentage of GDP. After that, it fell slowly till 1993, when it recovered minimally. In the case of industry, it earned less than 10% of GDP in 1986 but it rose gradually throughout the period and reached 20% in 1995.
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