We are living in a throwaway society. Discuss the causes and problems.

Nowadays people consume more products than our past generation. We and our children have to leave in a society where throwing unnecessary goods out is a normal

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behaviour

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I will highlight the main root of throwaway habit and the consequences of

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problem.

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of all, I would like to say that in well-developed countries the

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average

income has been increased,

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, the level of life and a purchasing power

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higher.

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, shops and supermarkets have a big variety of goods, the choice of products are

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bigger

biger

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it was years ago. All that gives opportunities for people consuming more things,

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, after sometimes these

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products

are

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away.

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, when you go shopping to the supermarket and you need to buy just some bread and dairy,

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advertisement and marketings tricks with promotions push you to put dozen unnecessary goods in your basket , most of them will not even be used.

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, all unused or expired products are moved to the trash bin

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, and as the

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the society

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more rubbish that 20 or 30 years ago.

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,

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over

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over-consuming

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consuming

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leads to critical

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problems.

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, most of

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ndividuals do not utilize their waste rationally,

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, the recycling

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are placed in their cities, they do not sort

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their

garbage at home but prefer putting all in one bin.

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, the garbage which included plastic, fabrics and general waste, is

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transported

to the dump, which is caused

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soil and air pollution .

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,

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people leave rubbish after staying in the forest or on the beach,

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, it makes a big

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negative

impact on

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nature and ecosystem. In conclusion, a society

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in ages when they produce and use a lot of products. The rising economics give them

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possibility

to buying more than they need. Even so, not all men sort the garbage for recycling and do not think about saving

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nature.

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the environment has big pollution issues which are

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eason of people activities.