The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In

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modern era, several internet websites and social networking apps

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as Facebook, Google, Flipkart, and Instagram are securing the confidential data of users during their sign up process. In my opinion, the benefits of

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exercise outweigh its drawbacks.

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to analyze both aspects in detail with relevant examples. There are two major benefits of recording the personal information of the users.

Firstly

,

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data is used to post a relevant

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ebpage for people.

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is because, during

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egistration process, the populace often provide their likes and dislikes.

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customer friendly

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ads, which help users to purchase their desired products or services.

Secondly

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electronic media use

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customer

data to make their services convenient and flexible.

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, these

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enterprises

consider

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customer

interest and advice and develop

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website or application.

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, the latest press report by

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Google states that they use

customer

data to improve their services.

On the other hand

, drawbacks of

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could not be ignored. The major drawback is that sometimes

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gained information is used in Election time to cash votes of the public. Most of the participating parties misuse

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data to affect people opinion. These parties develop their election manifesto on the basis of

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public data which secure huge votes for them.

For instance

, in 2019, a famous newspaper "The Times of India" reported that a national

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park

in India used the personal data of people to secure their votes.

Therefore

, there should be stringent law so that confidential data of inhabitants would not be misused.

Therefore

, overall, I believe that the positives of

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practice are far more than its negatives. In conclusion, it has been observed that networking firms are using the personal facts of the populace. The benefits of

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methodology are to provide

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advertisements and to improve their current services.

However

, the main side-effect is the misuse of users data to cash the public vote during

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lection. Despite

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negative, I firmly believe that the advantages of

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exercise outweigh its disadvantages.