Some people think that government should give high salary to the celebrities but others think that it should be provided to doctors and teachers discuss both views and give ur views

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Another controversial issue related to the salaries being paid to different professionals has been aroused among people in recent years. Some thinkers think that professionals like pop stars, actors or sports person are being paid far higher than they deserve.  There are several other professions that
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deserve a handsome amount of salary.
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conclusion.
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of all, there is no
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profession
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more deserving or higher than the other. Every type of
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, either be it acting, playing or hospitality job is different and valuable of its kind. Talking about the amount of money
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being paid to entertainers, I think they deserve
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. Though they are not serving people, they play an important role in serving the
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. These people
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harder and harder each day to master their skills and amuse people. They play for the
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and represent it in the world.
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, our Indian cricket team give its fullest to win the game at national as well as international level so as to raise the name of the
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.  Another example that can be given is, film stars, they struggle a lot to get into
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field and eventually, when they are successful and famous people remember our
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by their names.
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, it cannot be said that these jobs do not deserve money. They are paid for their determination and hard
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.
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, it is undeniable that jobs like doctors, teachers or community workers are paid considerably less amount in comparison to
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bove professions. These fields of expertise should
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be paid generously depending on their performance and the knowledge they possess.  They are equally important to us as the entertainers.  These people serve the
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not sometimes just physically but,
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using their mental capabilities. To sum up, from the aforementioned, it is totally justified that no
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is high or low. Every profession has its own value and everyone deserves the best.
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, I recommend that
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of reducing salaries of the entertainers, people and
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overnment could think of increasing the wages of other professionals too.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • public funds
  • essential services
  • infrastructure
  • economic contribution
  • public sector
  • private sector
  • high-profile
  • charismatic
  • lifesaving procedures
  • intellectual development
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