Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

It is undeniable that the arts

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music and paintings are an indispensable part of our daily lives.

However

, some people argue that the

government

should direct its finances into something more productive. I am strongly in support of

this

notion as more support from the

government

can lead to

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increased revenue generated through the arts and

also

promote young talents.

First

and foremost, I believe it is of the utmost importance that the

government

channel more money into promoting the arts

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performing arts, visual arts and abstract arts.

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is because they have proven to be reliable sources of income for the

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for instance

, a 5,000 seater hall built for artists, specifically actors and musicians, to showcase their talents with each seat costing about #1,000. Definitely,

this

would bring an enormous profit for the

government

.

Furthermore

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visual arts and abstract arts can serve as attractions sites for the locals and

also

, visitors from other countries.

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the arts will promote the economy and financial sector of the

government

.

Secondly

, nowadays, most teenagers kill their dreams of becoming great artists most especially because it is widely believed that artists do not make

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ood income.

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, if the

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government

ensures that artists are being compensated well, the youths will have the confidence and motivation they need to pursue their dreams in the arts. To conclude, I am of the opinion that continuous support of the arts would in turn benefit the

government

and encourage young talents and creatives.