It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

It is certainly the case that many argue that ranges of athletes and musician are born with talents,

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, other people down own them. Opposite sides claim that any child can achieve it with acquired learning. I will give some

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my opinions below. It may need to be admitted that some children who have some inherent traits tend to be selected, especially in the field of sport and music. More piano tutors are willing to pick up students who own long and strong fingers

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because they have

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igher possibility of being

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rilliant pianist. The same reason for choosing a running athlete for

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ational team, trainers shows their preference and hope for the trainees who have longer legs and good lung capacity, which are all born with and can'

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with instinctive advantages, they

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can surpass others with their professional learning and studious

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can contribute to the achievement of sportsman or artist, which can be seen

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a more

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crucial

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factor than inborn. The NBA players, named Spud Webb,

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, who is famous for the reputation of "Dunk King" around the world. It is encouraging that he is only 1.60 metres, almost the lowest height record in the history of MMBA, defeating others with more than 2 metres' height.

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depart him from time-consuming learning and

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have inborn traits of his body, he

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in sports career with his

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constantly

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hard-working. For those children who don'

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have long fingers, they can

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become piano artists only if they

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and learn about every

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carefully. There is a saying that diligence is the means by which one makes up for one's dullness. To summarise, there are indeed some children with inborn talents who are more easily get access into sports or music world,

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, I strongly believe that acquired study and

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status for sports player or musician.